PetSave
project
made
possible through grants
A
dozen animal shelters
Together,
these shelters have rescued
homeless pets
increasing power of social
media
social
media and the Internet
raise
funds and awareness
ongoing
support and training
animal
cruelty investigations
48-hour
online fundraiser
low-cost
spay/neuter clinics
an
umbrella organization
adoption/surrender
services
"shine
a flashlight"
Work
Cited
http://www.unionleader.com/article/20130211/NEWS01/130219875&source=RSS
I like how you turned something that was informational and grouped the words in such a way that it appeals to the reader on an emotional level.
ReplyDeleteEven though this topic can be sensitive, I enjoyed reading it because of your choice of where and when to place sentences and information. I like how you also included the different ways society is attempting to solve this issue. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThis is a really interesting topic, Kayla. I think you captured it well from an informational aspect. I wonder how this message might be highlighted or altered if we added in other sources. How might certain songs change this or make it more emotional? The first song that popped into my head was that Sarah MacLaughlin song "Angel" that they always play with the ASPCA commercials. Nice work.
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